I just came home…

…and nobodys here.

7 Responses to “I just came home…”


  1. 1 calyban

    Category: [Writing & Poetry]

  2. 2 jeck

    What makes you say that?

    If I had told about the journey of a man deep down into the cellars of doom only to find that he is not ready yet for this journey and how the same man went to consult a witch which made him dream of his dreammaster who in turn will guide the man but has yet to be dreamt well enough to be of real help. And if I would have wrote too that the man smiled a sad smile when he realized how long his journey would be and how uncertain the outcome is, that would be [Writing & Poetry].

    Edited on Nov 30th 2005, 12:50 by jeck

  3. 3 calyban

    Well, that might be [Writing], the above is [Poetry].

  4. 4 jeck

    Maybe two lines & a icon even qualify as a haiku? ;)

  5. 5 Outsider

    Being somewhat of a traditionalist, I have to say: not a haiku.
    But compared to other contemporary poetry, calyban is right:
    [Poetry]

  6. 6 calyban

    I just arrived home
    and now it would appear that
    nobody is here

  7. 7 jeck

    Does that qualify? And what says the HaiKu-traditionalist?

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